Will this work???

I have a couple of people who coaching me. Here’ is the suggestion one of them made:

I am deeply touched… because my “coach” wrote:

ABSOLUTELY PERFECT!  I am sitting her in awe (and a few tears in my eyes too) with pride at seeing you take our conversation, a few of my words and practicing them until it works.  I am very proud of you and I can’t wait to find out how this might change your sales call.  Who would NOT want to book you!

Will it work?  I don’t know…but I am excited to find out!