I have a couple of people who coaching me. Here’ is the suggestion one of them made:
I am deeply touched… because my “coach” wrote:
ABSOLUTELY PERFECT! I am sitting her in awe (and a few tears in my eyes too) with pride at seeing you take our conversation, a few of my words and practicing them until it works. I am very proud of you and I can’t wait to find out how this might change your sales call. Who would NOT want to book you!
Will it work? I don’t know…but I am excited to find out!